humble-tomato
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I now see you had webtoons address there. But your link is linked to globalcomix which I don't know about. -
I'm not familiar with the website, but wonder why there is no setting to fit the image on the screen. Kinda got put off to read it.Leave a comment:
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Seems like a lot of work. Good work. I would have posted higher res too, with so much details, it's kinda hard to read with the low res. Kudos anyways. Looking forward to the inked version.Leave a comment:
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wha... this is overwhelming. You may need to strategically use shadows to lead the eyes.Leave a comment:
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If you are asking if there is one horizon line(eye level) for the viewer(reader), there is only one. If you are asking if vanishing points for the planes of wolverine's torso don't have to go to that same horizon line. No they don't because things can be tilted. Each object can have their own horizon...Leave a comment:
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Lovely. Love to see more. And very curious to read.Leave a comment:
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By trucking in, the 3 panels fail to convey what you want to tell. You may want a still camera while they lower down. The next right panel is very confusing what it means to tell. (Although I can guess what you are trying to say)Leave a comment:
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Lovely color. would do great hanging as a painting.Leave a comment:
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Thanks guys for letting me know. Great to know you are seeing what I intended.Leave a comment:
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Getting interesting... multiple pages with some space between pages would be nice for readers so they don't have to keep clicking away to each thread in my opinion... if it's not taking too long to load.(smaller image size will help in that regard)
May I ask what app you used for bubbles/captions?...Leave a comment:
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I would say it's a good sign that you are frustrated. It means you are looking for right answers. So I would say, don't stop getting frustrated until you find them.
A very good tip to find angle of a leg (Great thanks to Smitty) is the knee. If you look at her right knee that is somewhat a profile...Leave a comment:
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If u r happy, then cool, but proportion is a tricky thing when things are facing different ways. The upper leg looks too short or lower leg too long now. And sorry I meant construction for his torso and pelvis.Last edited by humble-tomato; 02-20-2020, 01:58 AM.Leave a comment:
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You certainly tackled balance and proportion better. But may I ask how satisfied you are on proportion of his legs and construction of his pelvis & torso area? I only ask because I think you are aiming to be picky to yourself.Last edited by humble-tomato; 02-20-2020, 01:39 AM.Leave a comment:
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I see what you mean, and that was sort of my process of thinking too. But I had a long and hard thought, and realized her holding 2 rifles isn't really soldier like or stealthy spy like. As Smitty pointed out only a poser would do for a photo shot. Hence, the Calendar Girl analogy. I now have her holding...Leave a comment:
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Mind you it's not supposed to be the first page. The intimate moments and placing the key should have happened in earlier page.
I had many takes with the first panel. I tried him on the window sill ready to take off, and so on. But all didn't work because of double hung window size.
And...Last edited by humble-tomato; 02-19-2020, 10:05 AM.Leave a comment:
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Spider-Man
I sometimes practice by fixing other's posts to what I think could have been done.
And It's one of those I want to get some feedback on too. The idea/thumbnails' credit goes to Spiderguts.
The earlier page is about MJ placing her key on a table, and Peter and MJ having some conversation....Last edited by humble-tomato; 02-19-2020, 06:41 PM. -
My favorite of your bundles. You have dynamic poses. I believe the right side lines are meant to be foreground building? It makes tangent with the ground lines, thus making it look like ground elements.Leave a comment:
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That’s a pretty extreme upshot of a foreground building. This is one of the cases you may want to have a slight 3 point perspective. As of now, foreground and background are miss match. Love the combi of blacks and whites.Leave a comment:
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Point taken. Loud and clear. Thanks a lot again.
I am massaging her arms a little to salvage what’s there. And hope to practice inking. Will post soon.Leave a comment:
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Nice pic. You can see even the skinny lady has thicker legs than her forearms, and looks like her legs can support her body. Also, you can see the weight is more balanced.
I was not sure about the heavy shadow on his left shoulder. Now I can see it needs to have half tone shadow, or even...Last edited by humble-tomato; 02-18-2020, 01:27 PM.Leave a comment:
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