humble-tomato
Last Activity: Today, 03:22 PM
Joined: 10-25-2014
Location:
-
Love coloring and that warrior guy. Some things didn't make sense. Puke coming out of nowhere and very low, the guy slashing too low for arm cut, him disappearing in the next panel, him being far away for the head chop to make sense. -
i use imgboxLeave a comment:
-
In my opinion, moving her to the screen left between the window and the shadowed area might be better....Leave a comment:
-
I used to. Was a 2D digital and 3D animator for many years. I know how much work it takes. Kudos!...Leave a comment:
-
love the character designs. I would flip page 2 panel 4. Can't figure out what she's doing on the last page, 2nd last panel. And is there a reason for her to be inside that BG-crowded area for the last panel?Leave a comment:
-
That Dead Devil youtube video was a blast! I never heard of those free animation software you mentioned. So cool!Leave a comment:
-
Approval
-
Whew. I'm glad I don't do drugs. Look at those young boys, only 1 year older than Sam.
Enjoyed it very much. Very publish-worthy.Leave a comment:
-
I think it's better if you show the running machine with him on it in a panel more clearly, rather than showing a giant tree and a teensy bit of the running machine. Because it's losing clarity there.Leave a comment:
-
My concern for your style is lack of contrast and clarity. Too much black everywhere and hard to find focal point. Not sure if you read 'How to draw Marvel way', but it reminds me of one of the examples of too much emphasis/blacks everywhere.Leave a comment:
-
cool. I wish her sword was all the way in to feel the action more.Leave a comment:
-
I prefer the original proportion. With shrinked body her head seems too big for me. Good job on the simplistic inking!...Leave a comment:
No activity results to display
Leave a comment: