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I have this, and no complains so far. I got it after hearing Ryan Ottley uses it for his blue line layout method. One thing is though it's big. Ryan warned it and it's not too bad sitting at a corner...
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Love the design. I think his shoulder/neck constructions have issues. I think if you rotate your arm that far back, the shoulder blade has to go along with it. Thus, the pec on that side has to show significantly. I don't mind the wonky perspective for this cartoony car, but I think if you lower the...Leave a comment:
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I think he's at a stage where he started using his basic perspective knowledge in his work. (Earlier posts were avoiding perspective altogether) It's a right track and those mistakes are very common ones that we all have to go through. I hope he acknowledges his construction issues as well and start...Leave a comment:
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I personally didn't mind the last page's crescent panels as they had a relatively followable flow. I thought it was kinda cool, except for the last one which was confusing.
But, the last circle panel was kinda puzzling to me to end the story, which brings too many questions. Without seeing the...Leave a comment:
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I went ahead and wanted to study this some more myself. Here is fixings for what it's worth.
I think the vanishing points are too close but I went along with it for time sake.
I found the room's setting doesn't seem suitable for luxurious big room (having the bed very close to the door for...Last edited by humble-tomato; Today, 09:09 AM.Leave a comment:
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It has good feel. I think you have scale issues. Characters to one another. Inherently the bg perspective also has issues. The gun changes size too. I think the use of black needs to be refined with some whites because the pn1's foreground figure is unreadable/confusing and it reads as a big lump....Leave a comment:
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Nice. I like this kind of style too. I'm guessing the big rear is intentional. The gun pose seemed a bit awkward and I couldn't put my finger on it why for a while. But now I think it's because her elbows ( or an elbow) are too much tucked in on the torso, and it gives impression that she has no idea...Last edited by humble-tomato; 08-08-2020, 09:39 PM.Leave a comment:
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Oooh, very Alex Ross -esque. Great stuff....Leave a comment:
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you can't use "upload attachment". you need to post to somewhere else (ex: Deviant Art) then link to that image post. I'm really not sure why we even have that 'upload attachment' button.Leave a comment:
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You have beautiful stuff there.Leave a comment:
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Love the first panel's Captain Buffalo inking!Leave a comment:
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why don't you post a link to your image, and I can help you out post properly.Leave a comment:
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Here are my findings.
Think the shoulder to arm foreshortening should be better constructed.
More importantly, there are issues with how forms (Head, torso, pelvis/lower body) connect.
The top box is torso, the bottom box is pelvis.
1 is what you have. they are having...Last edited by humble-tomato; 07-28-2020, 06:10 PM.Leave a comment:
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Ooh. Skinny arms and big hips/legs tell us she's bottom obese rather than strong build warrior no matter how much muscle detail she has.
if the sword is swinging forward/across, her upper body should twist, and arm should come across the body. Or you can spread out her right arm more to the side,...Last edited by humble-tomato; 07-28-2020, 10:40 AM.Leave a comment:
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The more important one, I found, was Superman's neck position. It should be a lot further to screen left. Try erasing his arms, and see how the neck connects to the torso....Last edited by humble-tomato; 07-26-2020, 12:43 PM.Leave a comment:
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These are very challenging poses. I tried to fix structure issues. (for my own study as well)
Batman's pose is always tricky with the rip cage twisting and foreshortened, and the head turning to straight on at the same time.
Hope I got a few right.
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I believe one of the main purposes of layout is to find a clear way of telling a story. I know artists thumbnail and erase and thumbnail again to find the one they like. Preferably with simple/dirty sketches for speed. Yours doesn't seem what layouts are supposed to be. To me(as a reader) there are...Leave a comment:
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As much as I'm fan of your work, I think the last two are showing your weaknesses. (which might not be a bad thing of course)
For batman, I think you need to decide which way he's going. Is he falling straight down/ Is he falling away from us/ Is coming toward us/ Is he jumping up? Because a lot...Leave a comment:
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Hey Ddesosa, if you plan to fix the fingers, notice in the photo, the fingers are placed in the center of the mess, which I didn't do correctly either.
What I mean is... If we draw an invisible line through the contact points (in the photo), the line will cross the core center of the ball....Leave a comment:
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I quite like the read and black.
As you asked... Here is my crit. I don't mind getting corrected, so anyone can jump in.
Is your picture similar to this?
https://www.gettyimages.ca/detail/ph...image/57226140
Your thumb is behind the ball rather than underneath....Leave a comment:
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