humble-tomato
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Thanks for suggsestions guys. I now see many small flaws and leather renderings are close but not quite. Hairs are always challenging to me. Thanks for the hair suggestions too. BG definatley is lazy and not fitted. No idea why I made only the hair flow with the wind. I always find many things after...Leave a comment:
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mainly perspective, and anatomy/construction, which you mentioned already. Cheers.Leave a comment:
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This has very good things and bad things at the same time, which isn’t a bad thing. What? What??
cool piece..Leave a comment:
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I think thus piece sums up your strength and weakness. Good overall skill. But weak attention to detail and 3D/perspective thinking throughout.
weak head construction; ear too far back, weird nose/bridge construction, wrong nostril placement, weird lower lip/chin transition, weak far eye/bulged...Leave a comment:
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Thanks for the bodybuilder images. What is the other extreme pose called and does it stretch trap, lat?
Now back on the hand pose again, I think your first drawing hand pose is not possible, thus bad?Leave a comment:
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Thanks!!!!!!!...Leave a comment:
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Need an approval on Post #21 or 22.
I knew multiple 'edit' will block it, but this time it blocked at the first 'edit' try.
https://www.penciljack.com/forum/lab...d-selina/page2Leave a comment:
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If you don't mind, could you post the exaggerated version of what you mean for the collar bone, shoulders, pecs, lats ? Because your 2 drawings are basically the same in those areas, except for the arms and the front shoulder shape.
Just trying to study on the anatomy differences for the extreme...Leave a comment:
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My 2 cents.. you have relatively good controlled lines inside the front window and under the front ship. But the lines on alien are too dirty, so it doesn't read as shadows but he has dirty uniform.
His far arm looks too uncomfortable to bent that way. Need to see upper arm if hand is raised that...Leave a comment:
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Disclaimer: If I goof it up, please ignore or correct me.
This panel 2, with your perspective it will work if the camera is placed far away from the couple.
Once we truck in as you have it, the camera is somewhat looking down from above them. so the perspective...Leave a comment:
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Hey mjcurry7294
One more thing I thought might help you down the line. Get "Rendering in pen and ink" by Arthur L. Guptill. Smitty frequently mentioned it in this board. I hesitated buying this book due to higher price than other similar books, but I'm glad I got it. It will give you...Last edited by humble-tomato; 05-02-2019, 03:53 PM.Leave a comment:
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I don't think that slump pose works because it will have to go through the giant's head. And I don't mind the cartoony eyes and not having the eyeball covered at the bottom. Cartoons do it all the time asian or not. and I think your adult form/drawing is totally different from the original's design...Last edited by humble-tomato; 05-01-2019, 04:08 PM.Leave a comment:
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Hey Devilman, you missed the notes for #6 in your red numbers. The notes seem spot on for me. Ugh, and I hate(sorry) GIFs as I have to import in Photoshop to study each layer.
Edit: Forget I said that. That was a little selfish of me, as I only have to import, but feedback givers have to...Last edited by humble-tomato; 05-01-2019, 11:44 AM.Leave a comment:
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Not showing up.
And I'm not sure what I am looking at in your drawing. Maybe thicken(a lot) the outlines of the each ship so it's easy to distinguish so others have easier time helping out?Leave a comment:
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I don’t get this....Leave a comment:
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I enjoyed reading this comic, and was just gonna be done enjoying the art and crits, but I realized it’s you who made the post that I came to care much some time ago. So I decided to share what I think, but I got a little carried away. So please don’t read too much negativity, it seems dissecting...Leave a comment:
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My favourite page of yours so far. Some crits.. Is she holding a knife? or is it something that has 3D volume? because it reads as 3D shape, rather than a blade.
RUMBLE could be more clear? it's conflicting with the ground lines. Same with the '!!' The 'take' symbol and '!!' are conflicting. Love...Leave a comment:
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Thanks for confirming it, Smitty. This pose is always tricky and I was getting conflicted....Leave a comment:
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Thanks shaw, eyes a bit too big and wide apart was exactly my after thought. Thanks for confirming it!
Thanks Devilman, you draw muscles so simple and nicely...Leave a comment:
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