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Pummel January 2021--Nanashi vs battlewraith--Cyborgs
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Jim Steranko's The Laws of Action
I watch a youtube channel called ComicTropes that discusses various issues related to comics (artists, genres, etc.). Recently there was a video about Jim Steranko's career in comics and it mentioned that Steranko had written a short guide on anatomy and posing characters called "The Laws of Action."... -
battlewraith replied to How much would it cost to hire a pro artist for my project? How would I hire one?in Break RoomI guess it sounds like a crazy idea to me, just because $20k is a lot of debt to incur to get the second script done. And that is money being spent to do the art. I'm assuming there would be substantial additional cost to get it printed and out there.
Given that you are doing your own art...Leave a comment:
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Fresh my overall advice would be to push the values more. The main characters are black and white but everything else is pretty much is rendered in a relatively light range of greys. Making the darks darker will help push the depth and make the figures stand out more. Also it can make things more dramatic....Leave a comment:
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Nice job man
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Thanks crazy! The coat thing was a clumsy way to deal with the passage of time. I will probably have her removing it in the middle panel to make things clearer. Thanks for your feedback and glad you liked it!Leave a comment:
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Epic David Lynch! These are all great though dude.Leave a comment:
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Thanks Bryan!Leave a comment:
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Fever Dream Girls, chapter 2, pages 7-12
Here's the rest of the sequence I wanted to share:
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Smitty--Thanks for taking the time to help out! I often get a vague feeling that something's wrong, but it's hard to be objective on things I'm working on.
I'm happy that the storytelling is working for you. I can address the things you pointed out, but if it wasn't compelling at all, there would...Leave a comment:
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Fever Dream Girls, chapter 2 , pages 2-7
Hey all, I'd like to post some pages from my comic project. Most of it is explicit and I can't post here, but these pages are from the second chapter which is sfw. Thanks for looking and feedback is welcome as always.
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It says sample pages in his original post. I think that was something that threw people off--usually when people post sample pages here they post samples of sequential pages. These are literal samples from different parts of his book.Leave a comment:
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Very nice dude! I've started my own comic and I really wish I'd done it sooner because you do learn a lot by actually telling a story. I would be interested to see some of the earlier artwork to see what changed.Leave a comment:
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Alright, I'm going to play devil's advocate here. I think the OP may be right. This might simply be the wrong audience for this work. Given what we know about the project, he doesn't have the skill, time, or interest in doing what most of the people here would consider a proper comic book narrative....Leave a comment:
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Old work but I'll throw it in here anyway:
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Dan you killed it. Looks great! My only gripe is I wish that the fishnets wrapped around her legs rather than being a flat texture.Leave a comment:
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Not really, I just have a Deviantart account. Thanks though!Leave a comment:
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Looks good to me! Not real familiar with the character.Leave a comment:
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Raven Inks
I took a stab at De Outrora's Inkerjam challenge (lines by Marcio Takara). I'm not on twitter though, so I guess I'll post it here:
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