EddieChingLives
Modesto, CA 1979
Last Activity: 04-06-2021, 10:19 AM
Joined: 10-18-2000
Location: Modesto, California, United States
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You could try making a character sheet backwards. Grab the images of a character you already drew in the comic to reference later. If you use an angle not on the sheet, add it to the character file. It’s a cheat sheet for you to grab and insert later and as a result, you have more consistency and... -
Wow! I wish this was a full on movie! Super cool!...Leave a comment:
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Nice mood. Good stuff.
Plan headroom better so the balloons fit in the frames.
sometimes it helps to have one panel with backgrounds, then cut to close-ups so you don’t have to draw so many backgrounds.
Study films and comics and look at the blocking, cutting,...Leave a comment:
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I think if that third panel was behind him running towards the door in the background, ( possibly at a high angle perspective) that would tie the door in. But internal captions or thought balloons could fill in the gaps if you keep it this way.
“This sucker keeps dive bombing me!”...Leave a comment:
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Nice storytelling and character design.
I think the first panel could be wider, zoomed out.
The second panel could be pushed in a little more so maybe it’s just the hand in the foreground.
It would be nice to see one of those running shots pulled back so we see...Leave a comment:
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The text does help. Without it, I really like the atmosphere, clean line work, and backgrounds.
The suit design looks a bit unrefined. The elbow joints are kind of inconsistent. Sometimes it looks like they have elbow pads, sometimes not. And the fingers appear to be clawlike.
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