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Shaun
Shaun
Last Activity: Yesterday, 04:11 PM
Joined: 09-05-2006
Location: Los Angeles
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  • Shaun
    replied to Writing Contest #122 The Western
    If you want to make some small tweaks to the Zorro story (ie Toro instead of Zorro) it'd probably be alright. But maybe the original idea is even better!

    And for the rest of you.....

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  • Shaun
    replied to Harvey Bullock Story
    THE GOOD - I like this story a lot. It’s relatable and humanizing and, in a short span, shows Harvey’s whole life - just looking for a little recognition for his courage. The story is great, seriously.

    THE BAD - a lot of the fundamentals are off. First, you call for multiple actions...
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  • Shaun
    replied to Writing Contest #122 The Western
    Fun story, Zep! I'd love to see this one drawn. There were a few typos that a second read would've caught but it wasn't anything that effected the story. I did think Lucy was going to be a bigger part of the story given her introduction. I almost wonder if there isn't a way you could've foreshadowed...
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