Hey comrades I'm just in the middle? 3/4 mark? of this piece. Thots and thoughts appreciated mkay.
Spidey Reflections
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Cute thought but nearly everything is bass ackwards.
Squeegees are best used horizontally not vertically. The reflections are in reverse order of clarity: Clearest reflection would be the cleaner, followed by Spidey with buildings being the least clear.
The upper and lower windows should have the same degree of transparency or opacity. If you can see into the upper window you can see through the lower. If you can’t see through the lower you can’t see through the upper.
No one’s working the upper window, it should be as dry as the squeegeed area of the lower window.
One horizon per picture please. According to the frame of the lower window, the horizon runs through the lower window which requires the typist’s figure and desk to be an up shot. As long as we’re talking about the typist, where are his legs?
Spidey’s shooting hand is above the horizon and we’re looking down on it and the palm. In the reflection we should see the back of Spidey’s hand not the palm.
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