dananananananan catwoman

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

Maybe I'm really not pleased with this in general I think once I changed the facial direction it completely Wrecked the pose I think I'll revisit the piece this weekend and fix it up.

[The_Standard]

I think I would move the batman over to the left a bit, you could create a nice triangle in the negatice space that would point to catwoman.

[Toddoss]

Its a really fun picture. Its kind of muddy. add some hard highlights to help distinguish the form. Also I would've turned the knees out instead of in. cause she kinda looks like my cat in heat presenting herself.

[davechisholm]

i really like it!

nice mood.

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

well she's not coming at you she's getting ready to come at you. But yeah good crit sadly I have about 6 hours to finish so can't really start over :P But I'll keep it in mind for the future

progress.

[VicM]

Looking at your ref. To get that same angle your horizon line is right around her feet, maybe the ankles. So the building walls should go to the two points on that horizon. Probably far apart so the angle isn't to extreme, but see what works.

As far as the figure, to show that coming at you, slightly downward pose, we're seeing to much of Catwoman's back and butt. Essentially your layout looks like a shot from above (slightly above), but your ref photo is from slightly below.

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

acctually she's on the edge of a bulding about to leap but it does kind of look like she's on a tightrope at the moment haha... fancy that.

refferencing/inspired by

http://www.heavenscorner.net/attachments/Image/cougar-leaping.jpg

[dfbovey]

I thought she was peering over the ledge of a rooftop.

Probably right.

[VicM]

I thought she was peering over the ledge of a rooftop.

[dfbovey]

If she's walking on a tight rope, make sure the leg position makes sense. Right now it looks like her feet are on the same plane, while the wire is coming toward the viewer? If so, one foot should be further ahead on the wire and one leg further back.

[Manji]

pretty cool so far although it's way too early for any critiques or suggestions. I like the dynamics you have going on.

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

in progress. But so far so pleased.