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  • Big Hero 6 PUMMEL WIP

    got two scenarios i am working on so far

    First is a front on dynamic action pose


    second is the group battling their villain from the movie


    I like both so i may move on with both of them for now and decide later

    i know these are extremely rough right now, but any crits on layout on character placement is very welcome!
    Thanks!
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  • #2
    The bottom one needs a little reinforcement of the spiral layout. Use the lines of action.
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    • #3
      Thanks, i didnt even notice the spiral until you pointed it out,
      Here is an update, i think it's better, just need to make a few more adjustments i think and the start adding in some detail

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      • #4
        Wow you really know your big hero 6 characters. I'd totally forgotten the marshmallow thing got itself suit of armour.

        I think the girl on the skatewheels in the top picture needs to be grounded more a bit maybe....

        Your roughs are looking good all up though.

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        • #5
          That seems to flow better. Consider pulling them closer for a bit of overlap to establish some depth.
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          • #6
            Update with some details added. not real satisfied with it, may scrap and start over
            Opinions?
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            • #7
              I was playing with your lay-out, trying to create more depth, but yeah... i believe if you change the size of the characters you can make it work, also draw to your horizon line.
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              • #8
                Wow! that is a helluva sketch! if mine looked that good i would just use it for my submission! haha
                i think i need to rethink the whole concept. Your layout looks great but i still have to cram in three more characters :/
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                • #9
                  New direction, feeling this one a little more.
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                  • #10
                    That last sketch iteration looked pretty good! It seems like the smoke cloud going is pulling my eye the page to the right a little bit though. Not sure what I would do to change that.

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by Skothu23 View Post
                      Update with some details added. not real satisfied with it, may scrap and start over
                      Opinions?
                      I really like this one myself, it flows well and I like how it's centered around the bad guy, maybe if Hiro and Baymax were in the background, flying down from the top left corner, it would form a great ring around him.
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                      • #12
                        went ahead and finished this up . Thanks for the suggestions and advice everyone! as always its great to have extra eyes to see things i dont
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