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Just wanting some feedback on this piece, almost done the roughs.
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Carefull with head proportions, theire looking small because of the big heads, unless youre going for a cartoony style.Middlweight | W:6 L:0 KOs:4 | Streetfights: W:2 L:0 kOs:1
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The proportions are off quite a bit. I agree about the head issue, but also the individual characters. Sasquatch should take up most of the background, and Wolvie should be closer to Puck in size than Guardian. Try some different poses also. The current ones are very normal and static. Not 'SUPERHERO'-ey enough.OPEN FOR COMMISSIONS!
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Did some corrections, etc. The smaller heads def. help, i tend to do 'em way too large in the roughs.
So Squatch is kinda posed in a crouch behind the group, still working on the piece.Comment
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Puck is way too big. He shouldn't be at Wolverine's shoulder level.Money can't buy you happiness, but it will pay for the search.Comment
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Well he is considerably more in the foreground, bounding forward, so no, I don't feel he is too big. Even still, ignoring perspective, he isn't even at wolvie's shoulders. More like arm pit level, and again, he is off the ground. Moreover, I had some people previously say he wasn't big enough in comparison to wolverine in the preliminary stages. Wolverine's like 5'3 almost a little person himself.Originally posted by Popninja View PostComment
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