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The Horror of Being Alive end of issue #2 -- pages 15 - 20

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  • The Horror of Being Alive end of issue #2 -- pages 15 - 20

    Okay, here are the last pages of issue #2.

    Page 15 - they haven't slept at all because of the demon. The kid slept fine and is happy because the fresh food they were airdropped in the last pages. His cheeriness is grating on their nerves and Ben is going to kick his ass, but she stops him. The kid hasn't been seeing the demon, has no idea it's been entering the camp at nights, and she doesn't want them to sound crazy, so she's trying to keep the peace. She says she'll handle the situation and stands up, getting everyone's attention. She announces they're going to be moving their camp (to get away from the demon) and the kid wants to know why, since it makes no sense. She is so tired she can't think straight and fumbles for an answer.

    Page 16 - Ben points at the very distant forest fire as the reason they have to move and the kid is skeptical, but they start packing anyways.

    Page 17 - they pack, the cart's electric motor is charged, they start up the mountain. Ben says he found the missing peanuts (she had been freaking out about them because the kid turned out to be allergic to them and she didn't know where they went).

    Page 18 - this page is really annoying because I accidentally drew Russel Brand in that one panel and no matter what changes I make, it still looks like him. I wasn't drawing from a picture or anything, it just turned out like him. I'm probably going to have to redraw that entire panel. It used to look a lot more like him, but I tried to fix it. Anyways, in this page Ben tells her that the peanuts were in her bag, where she had originally put them to keep them away from the kid. She begs him to believe that they weren't there. He says he knows, he believes her -- because there's something out there. Something messing with them, playing games with them, hunting them. He can feel it, he's seen it. And if she can't think straight, that's okay...

    Page 19 - ... because he'll do the thinking for both of them. The demon has Ben (which explains why he's been somewhat erratic and violent in this issue of the story).

    Page 20 - the audience begins to understand what the final showdown is going to be.
















  • #2
    Oof. I just noticed that wheel is off-centre. I have no idea how that could even happen.

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Joseph Dredd View Post
      Oof. I just noticed that wheel is off-centre. I have no idea how that could even happen.
      lol first thing my eye went to...other than that looking good..your Wolf is outstanding....Good stuff in spite of the off set spokes...
      Keep that Pencil Busy!

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Bryan E.Warner View Post

        lol first thing my eye went to...other than that looking good..your Wolf is outstanding....Good stuff in spite of the off set spokes...
        lol I did the same thing with a wheel in another page, but I caught it in the rough version. It looks like when drawing ellipses digitally I need to reset my measurements to find the centre, which I don't need to do with pen and paper. I can't explain it. Need to add a shadow to the wolf, too.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Joseph Dredd View Post

          lol I did the same thing with a wheel in another page, but I caught it in the rough version. It looks like when drawing ellipses digitally I need to reset my measurements to find the centre, which I don't need to do with pen and paper. I can't explain it. Need to add a shadow to the wolf, too.
          So it's a digital error...just needs tweeking....
          Keep that Pencil Busy!

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