Fever Dream Girls, chapter 2, pages 7-12

[battlewraith]

Here's the rest of the sequence I wanted to share:

[Bryan E.Warner]

I'm Liking This..Good Show!

[battlewraith]

Thanks Bryan!

[crazyjedichicken]

much stronger work here! the Backgrounds are really clicking here ! And the new character looks fantastic! Really strong show! only things that jumped out at me was page 2 panel 8 , where did her coat go? its a major action and we don't see it.
also the tray with the tea and cups, maybe just have the handle and spout stick outit just makes for a better outline .
but man , you can set a mood! Strong story telling!

[battlewraith]

Thanks crazy! The coat thing was a clumsy way to deal with the passage of time. I will probably have her removing it in the middle panel to make things clearer. Thanks for your feedback and glad you liked it!

[Joseph Dredd]

That sequence with her heart coming alive again might be one of the greatest sequences I've ever seen depicted in comics. I'm not even exaggerating, I love it that much. I wish I thought of it.

[battlewraith]

I wasn't sure how that was going to go over with readers, but feedback has been positive.

[crazyjedichicken]

l forgot to mention the heart scene ! It was wonderful! Made me understand the character so much more than a page of dialogue could have !