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  • Fever Dream Girls, chapter 2, pages 7-12

    Here's the rest of the sequence I wanted to share:





    sketchbook thread

  • #2
    I'm Liking This..Good Show!
    Keep that Pencil Busy!

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    • #3
      Thanks Bryan!
      sketchbook thread

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      • #4
        much stronger work here! the Backgrounds are really clicking here ! And the new character looks fantastic! Really strong show! only things that jumped out at me was page 2 panel 8 , where did her coat go? its a major action and we don't see it.
        also the tray with the tea and cups, maybe just have the handle and spout stick outit just makes for a better outline .
        but man , you can set a mood! Strong story telling!
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        • #5
          Thanks crazy! The coat thing was a clumsy way to deal with the passage of time. I will probably have her removing it in the middle panel to make things clearer. Thanks for your feedback and glad you liked it!
          sketchbook thread

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          • #6
            That sequence with her heart coming alive again might be one of the greatest sequences I've ever seen depicted in comics. I'm not even exaggerating, I love it that much. I wish I thought of it.

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            • #7
              I wasn't sure how that was going to go over with readers, but feedback has been positive.
              sketchbook thread

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              • #8
                l forgot to mention the heart scene ! It was wonderful! Made me understand the character so much more than a page of dialogue could have !
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