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  • BADGE NUMBER- my recent commission work

    suspense short story written by Paul Allor for Comics Anthology, art by me:

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    Thanks for looking.
    C & C are always welcome, especially from areas where I lack.

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  • #2
    So the guy is hesitating opening the door?...I'm not sure I'm getting his expressions in page 2 and 3 he's suddenly Mad then Scared then Scared to really Mad.
    The Cop kicks the door Open and after a brief talk walks right to the Dead Girl.( how did he know ) and now our Character is freaked out again...and as the cop appears to be leaving he also looks like he could be guilty
    it's probably me but I found these a bit confusing..
    Your Art though is pretty darn good.
    Keep that Pencil Busy!

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    • #3
      Your faces are an interesting mix between a western and eastern style. I would work on your noses some of the times they come off looking pigish. Everything look very competant structure wise. Each panel works well but I have to agree with Bryan Warner that I get confused. Your storytelling needs to gel a bit smoother. Its hard to say how without knowing the script your working with.
      "A man convinced against his will, is of the same opinion still."

      Never argue with an Idiot. They will drag you down to their level and beat you with exp.

      http://toddoss.deviantart.com/

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