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Hi everyone,
The last time I posted here was like seven months ago and received lots of very good advice, so here I am again.
In my previous post, I drew lots of buildings, and Smitty himself told me to pay more attention to the rooftops. In this post, however, most of the action takes place inside a cave, so I didn't practice my buildings, but I did try to follow most of the other advice you guys gave me, which is mostly facial expressions, attention to detail, and dialogues.
To improve my dialogues I used an app called Grammarly, which is awesome because it not only helps with spelling but also with the clarity of the writing. This is especially useful to me because I was born and live in Uruguay, which is a Spanish-speaking country.
I still assume, however, that the best way to improve my writing is still to read as much as I can.
This time I also practiced my shadows.
Hope you like what you see (or, better yet, that you tell me what you don't).
Luis
The last time I posted here was like seven months ago and received lots of very good advice, so here I am again.
In my previous post, I drew lots of buildings, and Smitty himself told me to pay more attention to the rooftops. In this post, however, most of the action takes place inside a cave, so I didn't practice my buildings, but I did try to follow most of the other advice you guys gave me, which is mostly facial expressions, attention to detail, and dialogues.
To improve my dialogues I used an app called Grammarly, which is awesome because it not only helps with spelling but also with the clarity of the writing. This is especially useful to me because I was born and live in Uruguay, which is a Spanish-speaking country.
I still assume, however, that the best way to improve my writing is still to read as much as I can.
This time I also practiced my shadows.
Hope you like what you see (or, better yet, that you tell me what you don't).
Luis
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