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    Hi everyone,

    The last time I posted here was like seven months ago and received lots of very good advice, so here I am again.

    In my previous post, I drew lots of buildings, and Smitty himself told me to pay more attention to the rooftops. In this post, however, most of the action takes place inside a cave, so I didn't practice my buildings, but I did try to follow most of the other advice you guys gave me, which is mostly facial expressions, attention to detail, and dialogues.

    To improve my dialogues I used an app called Grammarly, which is awesome because it not only helps with spelling but also with the clarity of the writing. This is especially useful to me because I was born and live in Uruguay, which is a Spanish-speaking country.

    I still assume, however, that the best way to improve my writing is still to read as much as I can.

    This time I also practiced my shadows.

    Hope you like what you see (or, better yet, that you tell me what you don't).

    Luis
















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  • #2
    Your images are too tiny too see....
    Keep that Pencil Busy!

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Bryan E.Warner View Post
      Your images are too tiny too see....
      Thanks! What about now?

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        oh yes! perfect...I really love what your doing with your black...But! to me it appears you may be counting on color to carry your work..This should not be...Color on the web Free...real life not so free..Your work should stand on it own...that way if it does see color it will be all the cooler...Now that said.. you may not have the info you need to tighten an give your work a finishing touch...So I recommend you head to the library an find..or you can buy The Art Of Comic Book Inking....by Gary Martin...it use to be 2 books but is now consolidated in to 1..should be around 25 bucks or so...in there you will see a vast way to ink your stuff by a lot of old pro's.....Your coming along nicely...Keep that Pencil Busy!
        Keep that Pencil Busy!

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Bryan E.Warner View Post
          oh yes! perfect...I really love what your doing with your black...But! to me it appears you may be counting on color to carry your work..This should not be...Color on the web Free...real life not so free..Your work should stand on it own...that way if it does see color it will be all the cooler...Now that said.. you may not have the info you need to tighten an give your work a finishing touch...So I recommend you head to the library an find..or you can buy The Art Of Comic Book Inking....by Gary Martin...it use to be 2 books but is now consolidated in to 1..should be around 25 bucks or so...in there you will see a vast way to ink your stuff by a lot of old pro's.....Your coming along nicely...Keep that Pencil Busy!
          Thanks, Bryan.
          I have heard of that book before, but I can't find it on Amazon. I'll have to search somewhere else.

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          • #6
            Press On!
            Keep that Pencil Busy!

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