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    Finally got this page wrapped up...got anther commission..then on to page 8
    Keep that Pencil Busy!

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    Looking good! I'm glad you're still working on this. I love his expression in panel 2! My only criticism is the action is a bit difficult to understand in panel 5. I think it would be more clear if he was leaning away from her and you had manga-style focus lines showing that she's rushing past him. Looking forward to the next few pages, I've always got my eye open for them when i pop in randomly.

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      Originally posted by Joseph Dredd View Post
      Looking good! I'm glad you're still working on this. I love his expression in panel 2! My only criticism is the action is a bit difficult to understand in panel 5. I think it would be more clear if he was leaning away from her and you had manga-style focus lines showing that she's rushing past him. Looking forward to the next few pages, I've always got my eye open for them when i pop in randomly.
      Thanks Joseph..I appreciate the in put...I got a commission I gotta do then on to the next page..Glad your still popping in Bro Thanks again.
      Keep that Pencil Busy!

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