The Big Red Cheese

[MaHeRo]

A sketch originally done with Prismacolors that didn't turn out too great that I then reworked in Photoshop.

[Lexclamation]

Is good! Nice job on the fingers, that's a complex hand pose, but you've managed to make it look really natural. And I like the way you drew the cape billowing around him.

My only crit is that his triceps seem to be stuck to his torso. And It'd have looked better, IMO, to have drawn in his legs too.

[Doppelganger]

i dunno, it's a good job technically - but he just don't look marvellous enough to me - his neck is nearly as thick as his chest.... just a tad puny?

[MaHeRo]

Is good! Nice job on the fingers, that's a complex hand pose, but you've managed to make it look really natural. And I like the way you drew the cape billowing around him.

My only crit is that his triceps seem to be stuck to his torso. And It'd have looked better, IMO, to have drawn in his legs too.

Thanks. I see what you mean about the arms being stuck to his sides. I screwed up his left arm in the marker version and while trying to fix it in PS I decided to try taking out all the line work in his torso and liked how it looked. I agree about the legs too, I may try adding those in.

Here's the quick, crappy marker version so you can see what I meant:

[Dri]

I think the marker version and coloured version are decent. I agree the the aforementioned crits too.

The original doesn't have a border and you did kinda get away with not drawing the legs. The coloured version needs legs tho.
It's just a floating upper body at the moment.

Try to explore a different facial expression though. The upturned brows really seem odd. I don't know if it's part of the character but for a pin up it doesn't work unless he is reacting to something or someone.