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I'm trying to improve, constructive comments are welcome.
I'm trying to improve, constructive comments are welcome.
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This video will assist you in posting images properly to Penciljack. The forum software in the video is slightly dated, but the principles are the same.
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The first thing that jumps out at me is anatomy. Never mind posing the body... start with learning the basics of anatomy. I don’t know what is happening with the legs.
My thoughts on the pose: it looks flat. He looks like a poster stuck to the side of the building. I would suggest arching the back, drop the weight into his hips.
The right hand: we need to see the action of the fingers. This not only shows the reader how the web shooter works, but it clarifies what the hand is doing.
The head: the neck is bent at an impossible angle. This goes back to anatomy. This is your biggest weakness, so that’s where I’d focus.Comment
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^^^ That’s what I’m talking about (doing my best impression of a Smitty critique)Comment
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Wow, great comment, thank you so much.Lately I've been reading Constructive Anatomy by G. Bridgman to improve in that areaOriginally posted by mattshults View Post
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Bridgman's a great place to start. You want to study perspective as well as everything, including light and dark, is governed by perspective. Example: Spidey's glove. The glove line represents a cross section of the arm which should be circular/elliptical. When drawing, complete that shape through the far side of the arm, the part you can't see. The arc you've drawn tells us the far side of Spidey's arm is flat as a board. eek!
One kneecap per leg, please. Opposing limbs forward
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Thank you! Impressive explanations.Originally posted by Smitty View PostBridgman's a great place to start. You want to study perspective as well as everything, including light and dark, is governed by perspective. Example: Spidey's glove. The glove line represents a cross section of the arm which should be circular/elliptical. When drawing, complete that shape through the far side of the arm, the part you can't see. The arc you've drawn tells us the far side of Spidey's arm is flat as a board. eek!
One kneecap per leg, please. Opposing limbs forward
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