Pummel piece

[Josem]

Would you care?

[SebastianSz]

It looks really cool There are a couple of things that, in my opinion, might work a bit better:

The perspective on the gun. I think it should be pointing away from us, based on the way she's holding it:
Also, but these are just my ideas, she could be pushed more into the contrapposto, and hold the gun in a more confident way, which we could contrast with her legs being more "girly". Still, I like the legs the way they are now a lot Another thing would be the bullet holes, I don't think they read very well. More cracks maybe?

[Josem]

Thanks for the crits, always good to have a different approach.

[Domo!]

Actually as per Sebastians notes, if this is a coming of age story, I think it would cool to leave this as you have it, because initially it does read as tough, but closed/ reserved, not as confident, kind of shy. Then later when she finds herself and really "becomes" the Danger ginger, you can revisit this cover with a more open confident strong looking pose. Love the rendering you got going on here though. Nice color contrast for the character vs background as well!

Cheers!