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Some observations of little things that are actually HUGE.
Nice twist on the warrior's body.
Proper alignment of the blade to the hand.
Proper alignment of knees and toes. Technically speaking, while swinging to his right, the knee would point slightly outward from the toe rather than inward but only slightly.
It's the little things, things the average reader won't consciously see or notice, that make the work. Good job.
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