Boba Fiction

[ThrashArt]

for pummel round 2


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The more I look at the second piece the less I like it.

[Paul M.]

The first picture seems to have really strange hands. The guy on the right also appears to be missing his arm as it falls too much into the shadow. My other gripe is that the heads just seem pasted on.

Sorry to come at you with all negatives, but hopefully those crits help.

[ThrashArt]

no those are fair Crits. the colors took away from the straight inks. but that just means there is room for improvement.

[Toddoss]

I agree with Paul. you could try adding a little bit of boba heads color to the bodies so they mess together a bit more kind of like the underpainting in oils or acrylics. also add some blacks to the helmets and that should also mess them together. On the second pic. the guys abs dont line up to the center of his pelvis and the girls knee looks turned in but the thigh looks turned out cause of the way you inked it. might be worth playing with it some more. I LOVE the slick feel of the 1st one though.

[voteforpedro]

"you know what they call a quarter pounder with cheese on Hoth ? An Iceburger with cheese "