Bang!

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

Did this for my Exams at school today, only had 5 hours and traditional tools so that's why it's kinda rushed but all in all I'm rather proud of it even though it has a buttload of flaws.



Comments Much appreciated, I'd say crits aswell but they'd be kind of a waste as I know alot of the errors here as I rushed it to get it done in time also I can't really alter it since I've given it to my teacher, but you can still tell me so I can learn for future pieces.

[jdmakescomics]

I like the clash of the blue/yellow streaks among the dirty black. I wish the fade to white with the yellows and blues was a bit more gradual and clean...and the monsters might be TOO clean compared to the hero who is kinda faded out...I dunno. Hard to crit, as you said.

[pigeonmilk]

Paintings are hard to crit on depending on what your going for style wise.

Explain the style then maybe we can give some constructive crits.