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thats pretty sweet. one thing that bugs me is that his face seems super wide. meaning on the outside of the eyes... it almost looks like he's got orangutan tumors.
I really like the lines and the hatching but agree that the face is really wide . Also the the Fists look flat with the claws coming out at the wrong angle . You might not have layed out the face cause the eyes are off set one another .
I can tell you did it fast and ya it's a warm up but it's in the finish work section so I picked out the problems .
Cool. I agree with the critiques so far and will just say that this might be worth fleshing out to make into a finished piece... keeping the energy and fixing the issues mentioned.
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I would also say check the left eye ... it is on a much larger angle then the one on the right. I would say it just looks off in terms of the facial anatomy. However, as a start to a piece this looks good.
JarJar Binks...you have a great style...I really dig the textures and line work...bbut you made his temple and forehead region way to wide and stretchy.
You could most likely make it an easy fix by bringing in the hair.
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