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    Group Shot from a comic project I'm working on



    All C&C welcome

  • #2
    This looks great. I especially like the telekinetic(?) guy reading the book without touching it- nice touch.

    Are you planning to color this as well? If not, the guy in the center (with the gun) kind of loses his right leg behind the girl (I can see it, but I had to search a bit). It's not a big deal, and wouldn't be an issue at after coloring.

    Again- nice job!
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    • #3
      You have a fairly realistic style, but you're drawing these big, cartoony feet. Try to get them more in proportion with the rest of the body.

      Also, I'm not sure what you're inking with, but try experimenting a little with line weights. All those same sized lines get a little confusing, especially with the two guys on the left.

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      • #4
        I've seen some of these characters around before. Looking pretty tight.

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        • #5
          very interesting. Nice, clean style. I love group shots like this, makes we wonder what everyone's story is.
          The girl looks especially well done.

          Hope to see more!
          Michael Nelsen
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          • #6
            Yeah, I think that one's name is Speed Chick; could be wrong though.

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            • #7
              kool characters!

              I think what the pic needs is diffrent line weights adds volume to the pic.

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