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  • INVINCABLE -- first try

    Alright heres the real one


    And heres my drawing


    I personally, think it is freackin amazing...XD.;
    no...but i do think it is an amazing first try. this is one of the first times ive even attempted to draw invincable
    -Mr.Biscut

  • #2
    That left fist is kinda weird bro...I'm a big Invincible fan so I may be over critical though...but you should keep trying
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    • #3
      the anatomy has been altered a lot in your drawing, like the leg. it looks like someone broke invincible's leg and he's smiling about it. also the face seems to be squished. just keep drawing and i'm sure you'll get better!

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      • #4
        dude....it looks almost exactly like that in the pic...i just made the bottum to big,,,,,could you do any [email protected]?!?#2
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        • #5
          Originally posted by Iwannabiscut View Post
          dude....it looks almost exactly like that in the pic...i just made the bottum to big,,,,,could you do any [email protected]?!?#2
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          • #6
            Originally posted by angeltread View Post
            are you 11 or 12?
            If so, that's pretty darn good for a 12 year old!!!

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Iwannabiscut View Post
              i just made the bottum to big,,,,,could you do any [email protected]?!?#2
              This site is set up so that artists can get feedback, comments and critiques on their artwork in an effort to improve. Doesn't matter what age you are or your skill level.

              If that's not your goal, or if you are going to be combative when people comment on your work... you won't last long here.
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              • #8
                Seriously now Mr. Biscut, we're all here to help. Calm down, listen to the advice given, and work it in to your piece.

                I wanted to comment on the odd shape of the chest myself, but that's a fairly minor thing. The bend in the leg looks a whole lot more drastic then the original piece, making it look, indeed, broken. But it's not something that is going to be horribly difficult to fix.
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                • #9
                  Alright i see it does look a little broken guys, but really. Its my first try at invincable and my regular art style is a lot different. oh and, i did take his advice, i was just kddin around
                  -Mr.Biscut

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                  • #10
                    The face looks good Iwannabiscut. The fist is the only thing thats really off....the leg could use work. But its mostly the fist. His pose is good
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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by dfbovey View Post
                      If that's not your goal, or if you are going to be combative when people comment on your work... you won't last long here.
                      Or Iwannabiscut you might last long and get a lot of little red gems as nice little presents! Like me!

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                      • #12


                        just figured I'd add this so you'd see clearer where you went wrong, you need to push the extreme perspective more and this is honestly the best I could fit it. Hope it helps!
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                        • #13
                          lol thats cool! thanks for posting that, now i know were i could improve! thanks man and ill go check out your art
                          now
                          -Mr.Biscut

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