Wolverine Cover

[Juggertha]

Did this as part of a contest on another forum... what do you guys think?

http://juggertha.deviantart.com/art/...dbath-85317374

[brokenhill]

looks good nice job ,My only crits are his chest looks a little to small and his right hand , the claws should follow his finger
line(just made that up)anyway keep up the nice work.

[Maruchan]

Looking good. However I kind of agree with brokenhill and kind of not: Something in his upper torso looks a little strange, I think that his chest is fine, but maybe his shoulders are pulled a little too far back? I think they should at least stick out past his biceps.
Also I think this piece would benifit from showing the tips of his bloody claws. A little more 'in your face' for the whold bloodbath thing. Keep up the good work. SNIKT!

[ssjtom]

again I'm going to say the chest,
but I don't think its cause they're too small or its the shoulders,
I think its more cause he looks like he has some boobs going on,
so maybe his chest is just TOO voluptuous
other then that its tight.
Dig the lighting coming down on him and the feel of the cover.
I like boobs too so really I'm not even complaining.

good shit.

[Beastie]

I think its more cause he looks like he has some boobs going on.

Yeah, thats how I see it. His pecs are too boob-like.

[nickbachman]

Yeah, pretty boob-like. I like the colors. I would put some newer labels on there though; I'm not sure a cover like this would've existed in 1991.

[wheelchairman]

I must agree with those -let's say it straight - "boobs". They look even "pushed-up" like Wolvie's got some bra. Looking at the picture again there's much more to tell. I really like the colors. But one more nitpick could be that his arms are completly different from elbow to wrist.. like one seems totally longer than the other. The musculature is also weird on his left arm. And for the right fist... there's something off.. maybe that his fist should follow the forearm when being so close-set. Maybe I'm completely wrong but I've tried it for myself and I realized that holding such a pose hurts! And... well.. don't take me too serious:-) The picture looks good.

[daredevil30269]

That looks good, though there looks like there is something wrong with the chest.

[Captain All That]

Yeah... that's pretty darn good. Would like to see more blood on Wolverine though... looks like red water and he's not wet at all... not really a blood bath.

Still better than what I can do though... so good job.

[Juggertha]

The chest: I think the problem is on his left side, the 'roundness' at the top makes it look like a boob (and the shading adds to that).
The arms: Yup, I buggered the muscularity on them.
The right hand: stills drives me nuts.
The blood: I really should have added some dripping off of him, but am now feeling too lazy to go back in and fix it.

Here's the final:

[namrog]

keep in mind his claws retract into his forearms, as it looks now they are just attached to his hands

[tygerM]

Very nice.
The colors are great!

My take on the chest: the pec muscle's point of origin is the armpit..it should fan out from there. His left one (as you mentioned) is overlapping that point instead of 'going in' to it.

[Juggertha]

Very nice.
The colors are great!

My take on the chest: the pec muscle's point of origin is the armpit..it should fan out from there. His left one (as you mentioned) is overlapping that point instead of 'going in' to it.

Yup yup, agrteed. I think that's the problem there.