Underwater: NSFW

[yomark]

The original drawing was done for the "Underwater" prompt for Day 4 of inktober 2017, but I never got around to inking it.

[humble-tomato]

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[humble-tomato]

Hey I like the color, the chest area, the volume on the torso/pelvis.
But I noticed you usually have issues with putting in too much lines, too much shadows...
Too much lines are making your woman too skinny in areas and Bruce Lee type muscles.

I did very quick edit to just remove unnecessary lines and made shadows lighter in areas.
Removed some extra wrinkles/lines in her face too.
Hope this makes my point clear.

[yomark]

That works for me! I wasn't happy with her right bicep: wasn't sure of the configuration/positioning there, so what you've done kinda solves that.

On Facebook, someone pointed out that I have the hands facing backwards………Is this true in your opinion? I had a lot of trouble seeing it in my mind, and actually drew them facing the outer way (or: reversing them) more than once. What I never did, which I SHOULD have is to look in the mirror.

[yomark]

Okay: so NOW you make me want to go back into this piece and REALLY do it up right………inking it (with corrections/improvements, and then rendering it up all nice.

Thanks for the look, the suggestions and the edit!

[humble-tomato]

Yeah the thumb should be facing toward her back. U dont even need mirror . Just raise your hand and lokk where its facing

[yomark]

Yeah the thumb should be facing toward her back. U dont even need mirror . Just raise your hand and lokk where its facing

I TRIED that!
………I STILL get confused though………brain-glitch!