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  • Jon Snow for the everbrawl

    A quick Jon Snow for the everbrawl due on the 15th of august. The topic for this one was game of thrones so pop over to the proving ground forum and throw your name in the ring! You have till midnight on the 15th!



    While this is finished ( as in coloured) Critiques and comments are, as always, very welcome and always appreciated! i might go back and ink this and recolour it so feel free to make suggestions! i'm already thinking of moving the knives so they don't overlap jons body, as i think it might read as the knives piercing his body! anywho! thanks for taking a look and go check out the everbrawl! the current street fighter one has some fantastic entries!
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  • #2
    Nice choice of scene... Darken the blood, make the entry stabs black. The two guys have the knifes facind us but they still facind Jon. Looking forward to see the finish piece.
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    • #3
      Hope you dont mind, just trying to give you ideias... and having some fun.
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      LightHeavies | W:7| L :3 KOs: ​6
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      • #4
        Thanks josem! Really appreciated! Love the weather effects!

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        • #5
          How do you get started on them so quick?! I'm jealous, I don't even know which character I'm gonna do yet!

          I like it, and agree with Josem's suggestions except for the darker blood. I like the brighter colors =)

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          • #6




            Robomike- thanks! i was off work for the past few weeks so was able to jump on the topics nice and quick!

            i'm in two minds about this update...once i figure out photoshop a little better i'll try and change it a bit more..
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            • #7
              I would have the blades overlap Jon more. Right now they are creating tangents. Also, depending how far away from Jon they are, the hands should be much bigger. Right now they are about the same size as Jon's.
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              • #8
                I like it. Hands need to be larger. I prefer to see tangents then be one.

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by ward1976 View Post
                  I like it. Hands need to be larger. I prefer to see tangents then be one.
                  Tangents destroy depth. They flatten the image. Tangent's er BAD, mkay....
                  Last edited by Veritas71; 08-10-2016, 05:35 PM.
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                  • #10
                    veritas- thanks as always man! yeah i knew the blades where creating tangents but for some reason just kept going...thanks for the feed back as always man

                    ward1976- thanks, yeah you're both right on the hands. as for tangents.. i get the feeling there's a joke there i'm not getting?

                    i had a bit of a rethink on the composition so did a bit of a re-draw. Not the final inks, still need to add in the blacks but kind of happy with it!

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                    • #11
                      And here's the final colours! thanks for all the feedback guys and good luck to everyone that's entering! there's still time to enter (it closes midnight tonight) over in the challenge and discussion thread or to vote on the next topic which will be due at the end of the month!
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