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    Bang Bang! did this earlier today, inspired by a lot of the old western paperback novels i have laying around. I wanted it to look a bit more rough and loose than my normal stuff to reflect the subject material.



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    Great piece, and I really like the firing stance, but I think you could frame the shooter with the guy getting plugged and the saloon door in the foreground . I did a quick mock up to show what I mean.



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    • #3
      Hi veritas, thanks for that draw over yea I see your point from that view u feel like your more in the action. It would of actually have been easier to draw that version as well.
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      • #4
        You need to up the cowdacity quotient (cowlishisness, cowocity...) more western, please.

        Fit the hat to the head, drop the 40's gangster big shoulders. Give us bandanas, vests, puffy sleeves. Chaps, not bell bottoms. Cowboy boots not shoes and socks.

        If the victim is coming out of a stable, the street and the barn floor are the same thing. There's no line between them and no change in texture. If it's a bar door, shrink door so it can be looked over and or crawled under. Show the boardwalk outside the door.

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        • #5
          I love this!
          it really brings me back to the seventies, reading British comics with artists who I only found out a few years ago, were Spanish!

          There's a slight touch of John Cooper there too.

          I'm envious.

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          • #6
            thanks for the feedback guys
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