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  • Egyptian Archer

    A page from my sketchbook that I put some inks on not too long ago. Kinda fudged the bow and arrow

  • #2
    something about the stomach muscles feels too perfect. At first glance I thought it was armor

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    • #3
      It overally looks nice. Maybe the upper bow string looks to be in a bit wrong angle. It doesn't match the point where the archer is holding arrow and string.

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      • #4
        Great concept and off to a good start. Comments: his pose still looks a little static and forced. I think maybe you should bring "his left" leg more in to the foreground and foreshorten it to give the painting more depth, and make it more dynamic and engaging to the viewer.

        Good luck! keep up the good work.

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        • #5
          This is some tight work,I agree with the other comments as
          well ,Also the top of his feet look odd,they ramp up to quickly after the toes,and his left foot the heel should cuvre
          under a bit.Kind looks like shoes or boots.

          looking forward to more.
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          • #6
            I'm by no means an archer, but shouldn't the arrow be on the OTHER side of the bow? It just looks off to me for some reason...

            Great pose!
            My scratchings:http://flint79.deviantart.com/

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            • #7
              Originally posted by FLINT79 View Post
              I'm by no means an archer, but shouldn't the arrow be on the OTHER side of the bow? It just looks off to me for some reason...

              Great pose!
              Gosh you're right! No way to shoot like this! The arrow is on wrong side of the bow.

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              • #8
                Nope - the arrow is on the right side: http://www.hopkinsvilleymca.com/user...ge/Archery.jpg

                You have some pretty nice lines here - very crisp. I do agree with the stomach muscles comment though, and I'd like to add that the arrows on the ground should have some fletching too. by the way - welcome to PJ!
                Artblog!

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                • #9
                  I agree, the stomach needs some work and there looks like there is something wrong with the feet. Good work.

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by krikkit13 View Post
                    Nope - the arrow is on the right side: http://www.hopkinsvilleymca.com/user...ge/Archery.jpg

                    You have some pretty nice lines here - very crisp. I do agree with the stomach muscles comment though, and I'd like to add that the arrows on the ground should have some fletching too. by the way - welcome to PJ!
                    Oops, sorry for that. Somehow it confused me...

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