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    In an alternate world where Bruce Wayne and Peter Parker exist, they go out of a Super-Double-Date with two super-heroins Black Cat and Catwoman.
    Version 1, 2013

    Version 2, Feb 2015


  • #2
    Hy,

    nice pieces!

    Good idea, a superhero double date It would be funny, if black cat/woman were the same person, so bruce and peter date the same girl - awkward. Who would win… her heart xD

    It´s obvious that you gained more skill over the years, but somehow I like the old one more. Maybe it´s the composition…
    Spidey looks like his is smaller in size than black cat, on the newer version.

    Keep on!

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    • #3
      Originally posted by Das N.E.K. View Post
      Hy,

      nice pieces!

      Good idea, a superhero double date It would be funny, if black cat/woman were the same person, so bruce and peter date the same girl - awkward. Who would win… her heart xD

      Keep on!
      Now there's an Idea!

      Originally posted by Das N.E.K. View Post
      Hy,

      It´s obvious that you gained more skill over the years, but somehow I like the old one more. Maybe it´s the composition…
      Spidey looks like his is smaller in size than black cat, on the newer version.

      Keep on!
      I will agree there. It is the point of the composition to obscure the Male Characters and make the Women more prominent. I purposefully turned their bodies to hide more than half of the males, and staring towards their partners. I guess it having he effect I initially thought off if your thinking that.

      And there is a bit more of a connection even to me on the first piece, maybe because of the big, flat blacks in the drawing. I think this means I need to do better in compositions with more detail if its going to compete with strong blacks like the first one.

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      • #4
        You need to establish a main light source. In the 2nd group, you have no shadows on the window or terrace.
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        • #5
          Originally posted by Veritas71 View Post
          You need to establish a main light source. In the 2nd group, you have no shadows on the window or terrace.
          Right. Yup. They look like they're floating. I was hoping the body contours would be enough to suggest light. I was going to do that in a colored versions.

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