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  • HAWKGIRL pencils

    Here is a pic I have been working on for pummel...



    Let me know what you think.

    Thanks,
    CW
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  • #2
    Looks cool, but if you were to mirror the legs, opposite limbs rule, you would also get the line of the shoulders opposite to the line of the hips. I made this quick image in Manga Studio to illustrate what i mean.
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    http://nabisga.deviantart.com/gallery/

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    • #3
      What Josem said. :P

      Also - nice inclusion of the Hall of Justice!

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      • #4
        I think it's whole lot of improvement from the first rough. For that, cheers! And the drawing is solid (except for the feet size & how they are pointing up & the waist line makes the belly bloated rather than flat) and I like the rendering as well. Maybe it lacks some appealing though throughout the pose and the face(mainly the jaw/chin line).. Just my 2 cents. But good work!

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        • #5
          Originally posted by plasticfangs View Post

          Also - nice inclusion of the Hall of Justice!
          Finally...someone noticed!


          CW
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