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  • #31
    Originally posted by krikkit13 View Post
    Veritas nailed that grip. You've gotten tons of good advice from this thread and you've been super receptive - nice work on that.

    This is what I'm talking about - negative space, color holds:

    That's actually pretty close to what I've got going so far… ignore the hands, as i haven't reworked that area yet.

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    • #32
      Nice! From a graphic design perspective, I prefer the lighter colored negative space, but totally get why you would want to go dark. I'd definitely take the hold off the tentacles though - that way they'll pop and be on the same plane as your guy instead of being pushed back to the building.
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      • #33
        Yeah. As soon as I took that hold of the tentacles, it looked much better. Thanks.
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        • #34
          It's coming along very nicely Ron. Well done and a such an improvement over the original. It's funny because I feel like you've leveled up a bit doing this.

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          • #35
            Thanks to everyone for the great advice and comments.

            Now, I need your opinion on 1 more thing... which of these color variations do you prefer?




            I'm leaning towards the one on the left.


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            • #36
              The one on the right. The purple really makes the fire/smoke really stand out for me.
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              • #37
                The one on the right but I think it needs bounce and rim lighting in a few places to really bring the colors together and add that professional level of finish. I'm also not crazy about the over use of the burn tool on the right leg. His left arm to me is fantastic.. if the rest of the piece was colored that way it would look incredible.
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                • #38
                  The right, for sure. Keep an eye on your tones though.
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                  • #39
                    Awesome work!

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                    • #40
                      Great colors and composition!

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                      • #41
                        Thank you!
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                        • #42
                          I would go with the left one, you can really feel the heat of those flames. The right is to cold, feels unatural, at least to me.
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                          • #43
                            Digging this stuff! I also really like the design of your protagonist - looks like a real guy as opposed to a generic comic hero.

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