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  • First issue cover

    Finished inks for cover of the first issue of my book.


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  • #2
    Very nice. Love the perspective and the way you broke the inking line on the background buildings.

    Also really like the clothing details.

    Almost makes me wanna color over it.

    Cheers!

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    • #3
      Originally posted by JulianoSousa View Post
      Very nice. Love the perspective and the way you broke the inking line on the background buildings.

      Also really like the clothing details.

      Almost makes me wanna color over it.

      Cheers!

      Thanks.

      Feel free to color if you want. If you want a higher res version, just hit me up with a PM.
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      • #4
        Here's the colored version:




        Title is still just a working title, not sure what the final will be.
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        • #5
          I hate that gun. HATE IT. The cover works pretty well, but that gun, ugh. Go find some ref for weapons and/or learn how guns work. And the way he's holding it - it's all I can see. It's just plain wrong. Did you have a friend pose for that and they just didn't know how to hold a gun? I'm giving you some serious $#!+ for this because the rest looks pretty darn good and this is your cover. Your character obviously uses a gun, but according to the cover, he doesn't know how to use a gun - unless that's a silly looking paperweight that he hits people in the head with. Sorry for the tough love man - I know I can come off as an ass when it comes to this stuff, but it's only because I care and want this to really be awesome, and the gun is holding it back.
          Cheers, Alex

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          • #6
            Originally posted by hadesillustrations View Post
            I hate that gun. HATE IT. The cover works pretty well, but that gun, ugh. Go find some ref for weapons and/or learn how guns work. And the way he's holding it - it's all I can see. It's just plain wrong. Did you have a friend pose for that and they just didn't know how to hold a gun? I'm giving you some serious $#!+ for this because the rest looks pretty darn good and this is your cover. Your character obviously uses a gun, but according to the cover, he doesn't know how to use a gun - unless that's a silly looking paperweight that he hits people in the head with. Sorry for the tough love man - I know I can come off as an ass when it comes to this stuff, but it's only because I care and want this to really be awesome, and the gun is holding it back.

            Thanks, man.

            You're right… i put very little time into the gun, and I should know better. Luckily, I still have time to fix it.




            Quick edited gun, until I have more time to work on it:

            Last edited by RonB; 10-24-2014, 03:10 PM.
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            • #7
              Muuuch better. Now remove his thumb, or the slide will when he shoots the gun. There should also be four fingers wrapping around his gripping hand, though only the tip of the index finger should really be visible in that pose.
              Cheers, Alex

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              • #8
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                • #9
                  Originally posted by Aaron2011 View Post
                  Great works!
                  Thank you!
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                  • #10
                    Updated 110414:

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                    • #11
                      Is the title pronounced 'DIS-UNITY' or 'DI-SUNITY'? Right now it's a little hard to tell. Maybe a lighter shade of grey to discern the emphasis on one of the vowels in the title.
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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Veritas71 View Post
                        Is the title pronounced 'DIS-UNITY' or 'DI-SUNITY'? Right now it's a little hard to tell. Maybe a lighter shade of grey to discern the emphasis on one of the vowels in the title.

                        It's dis-unity, but it does seem to have more emphasis on the "sun"… i'll put some time into fixing that. Thanks.
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                        • #13
                          I really like this man, i couldnĀ“t help myself, and played with it in Manga Studio for a while. The main ideia was to give you a titlle option, but i also spread his left leg a litlle, and retoutched the bend of the pipe. Please ignore the line art, i just love to put blacks on top of colors, and those are beautifull colors. See if you like any of the ideias.
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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by hadesillustrations View Post
                            I hate that gun. HATE IT. The cover works pretty well, but that gun, ugh. Go find some ref for weapons and/or learn how guns work. And the way he's holding it - it's all I can see. It's just plain wrong. Did you have a friend pose for that and they just didn't know how to hold a gun? I'm giving you some serious $#!+ for this because the rest looks pretty darn good and this is your cover. Your character obviously uses a gun, but according to the cover, he doesn't know how to use a gun - unless that's a silly looking paperweight that he hits people in the head with. Sorry for the tough love man - I know I can come off as an ass when it comes to this stuff, but it's only because I care and want this to really be awesome, and the gun is holding it back.
                            Your feedback is useful. But man -- saying your an "ass", doesn't really excuse acting like one. It's like using "no offense". Like "no offense, but this is a really rude critique."

                            I get it, tough love is vital. And people in the industry will be harder. But -- as far as I'm concerned, I don't think this is good way to offer advice.

                            And maybe I seem like an ass to you, but it's only because I care, and I don't want people on this site -- especially new people, checking this site out for the first time, to think they are going to get slapped around if they post any art.

                            It creates a bad impression. This was the first site I ever posted on, and the first time I posted, someone wrote me a message much like yours, only slightly ruder. I almost didn't come back to the site.

                            In my opinion, not cool.

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                            • #15
                              But RonB 's no nonsense acceptance of the feeback is very cool. Nice work man. Keep it up!

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