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  • Nightcrawler

    Hey all, here are some colours I have done recently.

    Pencils by Kevin McCoy
    Inks by Jeff Graham
    Colours Matt James

    I would love to hear what you think.

    Last edited by Veritas71; 06-12-2014, 10:30 AM. Reason: Fixed title

  • #2
    Yay for the title typo... obviously it should read Nightcrawler...

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    • #3
      Nice stuff

      Red band on right arm has a white spot in it (underneath the circle) that reads as a third finger. D'oh!
      PaulMartinSmith

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      • #4
        Thanks.

        And good spot. I have no idea how I managed to miss that. Thanks!

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Smitty View Post
          Nice stuff

          Red band on right arm has a white spot in it (underneath the circle) that reads as a third finger. D'oh!
          i was actually going to mention that very same thing, Smitty. I remember seeing the original pencils over on DA, but I'd have to go back and look at them again to see if that's a flaw inherent in the rendering.

          Overall a nice coloring job, Matt. My only real "criticism" would be that the red parts of NC's outfit seem a little too magenta-toned, which sort of makes the whole piece run together. If you warmed up that red a bit (done pretty easily in Photoshop) and maybe toned down some of the violet and purplish highlights on his white outfit parts, I think he would probably have a little more pop from the background...

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          • #6
            the face is quite dark, i think more rim lighting from both sides would help. it seems like you went for it a bit but imo the rim lights can be much lighter.

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            • #7
              I definitely see the 3rd finger that Smitty mentioned. I think a thicker outline around Nightcrawler's right hand should fix the problem. None of that is on you though, since you're just doing the color chores.
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              • #8
                Thanks for all the comments.

                I will have a play around with jeffchris50 and underwearhero's ideas and see how they work! Thanks again!

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