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Nice finishes, sirandal. I really like the ghost, all lines and colours.
The cape doesn't look that strong though, it lacks strength in the strokes, and also is a bit shapeless. For me it looks like a different style from the main figure and brings some inconsistency to your piece. But this might be subjective.
Nice finishes, sirandal. I really like the ghost, all lines and colours.
The cape doesn't look that strong though, it lacks strength in the strokes, and also is a bit shapeless. For me it looks like a different style from the main figure and brings some inconsistency to your piece. But this might be subjective.
Yeah I probably didnt get it right. SG's cape has weird wavy scallops and is gossamer and even translucent (at least the original version that I was inspired by.) I know for sure the lines are a little shaky, but they are thin and broken on purpose (but perhaps misguidedly so.) The shakiness on top of that was just fatigue I reckon.
Yeah I probably didnt get it right. SG's cape has weird wavy scallops and is gossamer and even translucent (at least the original version that I was inspired by.) I know for sure the lines are a little shaky, but they are thin and broken on purpose (but perhaps misguidedly so.) The shakiness on top of that was just fatigue I reckon.
My bad. Just checked him in google and half the pics have the same 3 legged amoeba looking cape:-) So your work is genuine mate, and I was proven comicbook ignorant again.
Also, I get now that the double lines on the cape are supposed to create some sort of a mirage effect and that looks a bit tricky to pull out right. Something like two shifted and differently warped versions of the cape on top of each other. Which, I think you got right in the top half, but I think you need more crosses between the to contours in the bottom half. Anyway, good stuff.
Great piece, sirandal! I'm a HUGE fan of Spaaaaaaaace Ghoooooost myself and was actually toying with the idea of a SG drawing, but nothing I could do could touch this! And I really like how you have him framed by the circle instead of just free-form floating out in space; gives the piece some nice boundaries!
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