Rasengan!!!!

[illdot]

[IMG] RASENGAN!!! by mad100s, on Flickr[/IMG]

Let me know what you guys think......

[jeffchris50]

Looks kind of derivative of many other manga sources. Also, the foreshortening on the piece looks a little wonky. His left arm looks waaaay too long (remember, if it's foreshortened, usually segments are going to sort of shorten and disappear behind each other). The anatomy on his right arm would indicate he has no bones in that limb the way it's angled/turned. His right leg is just way too big, even in a foreshortened sense...

[illdot]

Thanks a lot guys.....i appreciate the critiques......just what I needed

[Jim]

Seconding the line weights point, that would make a massive difference straight away.