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    Just throwing it out there, a quick piece of Batman with a little 60's style thrown in to a cartoon superfriends style. I have to do a Superman vs. HULK for my sons B-Day Cake so just wanted to dust off the ol wrist and get something done from start to finish. See what I could come up with.


  • #2
    Cool pic. His left leg seems a bit too short compared to the right though.

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    • #3
      Welcome to PJ, D Morgan!

      I illustrated many of the DC Comics' SUPER FRIENDS kids books, so let me see if I can help you out a little with some crits and advice.

      If you're going for the DC SUPER FRIENDS style, you're a little off on the proportions. Big feet and hands, but Batman's head needs to be a little smaller to fit the actual style.

      Batman's boots aren't correct. Batman's boots come to a point, and they don't have a V notch cut out of them at the top. Superman's boots have that, but not Batman's. Not even the '60s version of the Batman.

      CrazyDiamond is also right about his left leg. It seems smaller than the right, and could use some foreshortening to put it in line with the right. It's not a good idea to cover up legs that are meant to be bending at the knee, by the way. Viewer's need the visual information or you risk the leg looking weird and out of proportion, like with this drawing.

      Hope that helps,

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      • #4
        you got some good crits here (that bit about never covering the bent knee even helped me, and its not my drawing! love these boards!) you did a really nice job with the colours on this! good luck with the cake design and be sure to show us some pics of the finished cake!
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        • #5
          Originally posted by Bruce Lee View Post

          Hope that helps,

          Loston
          Loston, YES it does! Thank you. When someone else points stuff out you see it. As I said I was getting some practice for the Superman vs. Hulk cake..guess I had Supermans boots on the brain. Did not see it before.

          I might just try and fix this one..if I have time but thank you again. Been a long while since I was on here and glad to get some feedback.

          And yes just trying to go for the Super Hero Squad/Superfriends type of look that they have out now.
          Again thanks for the help!

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