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  • Slit throat opinions!

    Drew this for my girlfriends birthday, based off a dream she had in which a throat was slit open, and roses grew from the wound. BUT i cannot decide which variation i like better. Right now I'm leaning towards the traditional B&W, but I wanted to hear from you guys, if you have any suggestions- let me know!





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  • #2
    Maybe B&W with red roses and blood? B&W&R is always a good option =)
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    • #3
      my only crit would be the way the blood is flowing down.you have it all going straight down like blood on a window.
      it should be flaring to the right and left on the outside.or aleast mostly converging to the center.

      cool art though.
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      • #4
        thanks steele, ill try that out and post it, i think i tried it earlier and since the roses are so big the hint of red overpowers the piece. but ill post it.

        BrokenHill, now that you mention it, you're right haha, ill try and go in and fix that. thanks
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        • #5
          Nice. I agree with Emporersteele. Black and white and a single red (not rendered color). You already did a great job arranging tonal value

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          • #6
            This pic is very well done, I would leave it B&W.
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            • #7
              Thanks again guys, I'm glad you like it-

              heres the colored roses with highlights:


              and here's with flat red:
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              • #8
                here's another variant giving the vines and leaves color along with the neck wound.
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                • #9
                  I like that last one, HazelNut. The color on the vines and leaves gives them some separation from being "lost" in the hair and blood details from before. You might even try a tad lighter shade of green to give it even more separation?
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                  • #10
                    maybe making the blood red also

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