Juggertha lead me here

[benjonesart]

Well lead me to the pummels but I guess ill just say hello here with a lil something



pencils and inks all me

[Jel]

i can see some good stuff going on, but how many times will this famous Janet jackson photo be used as a basis for comic book art? It all started with Jason Pearson, and it's getting a little old IMO...
That said, I really dig the ink effect you achieved on the borders.

[benjonesart]

Yeah I know its overused but I had never done it =)...actually it started off as a commission and the guy didn't want the layout because of the same thing you pointed out so I just used it for myself since it was already halfway penciled.

[The P.R. Man]

i can see some good stuff going on, but how many times will this famous Janet jackson photo be used as a basis for comic book art?

how dare you sir! boobs never go out of style!

seriously though. nice to have you here Ben! awesome pic, and I can't wait to see more of your stuff!

[Sketchbook]

Welcome!
This is sweet work. Can't wait to see you over in Pummel. Looks like this is going to be a hot summer over in the art arena

[SeanE]

*waves*

Sean

[scmarooney]

Nice inks on that drawing! Welcome to Penciljack and PUMMEL, Ben! Hope to see more of your work here in the future!

[Popninja]

Firstly, welcome to Penciljack.

Secondly, you need to really work on drawing hands. Wolvie's hands look like they're gripping...kinda, but not really since you didn't really show any reaction to whatever he's doing in Jean's boobs. He should be cupping them, but you didn't convey that at all.

Good luck in PUMMEL.

[Juggertha]

Yeah, those hands are way off. Almost as if his fingers would be digging in... but not the way and average guy's would

The title of this thread is catchy though

[benjonesart]

Yeah hands have been a bane of mine for a while now but I didn't want them cupping the breast thought it would be too cliche thats why I just went with a losely held fist but its cool. Your pointing out the same stuff as I have seen problems with.,

[Dann]

Great, crisp lines here. I really like your inking style. For some reason, the flames on Jean are the first things I noticed....I really like the way you did those.
I'll ignore commenting on the hands, but I think Jeans head may be a little too small....just a tad.

[Aaron2011]

Let the hands grab those boobs, seems like they are too close to not go for it haha.
Anyways, I'm going to only point out what I think it working best. Her hips and unzipped jeans are real nice!