Fables Pin Up

[UglyPuppy]

Finished the pencils for a Fables Pin-Up I've been wanting to do for a while.

Cheers!

[Archerion]

Yay first post,, Have to say this is pretty sweet, cant wait to see this finished Crits, none other than i wasnt to see it finished.

[Paulo_P]

Pretty nice pencils.

[wcharles]

Nice. Bigby looks great in this pic. Fables is one of my favorite titles, I'm up to Vol. 10 with the trades.

[acosby]

Is that Goldilocks or Cindy up top? If its Goldie then she needs glasses.

Nice pic though. I love fables. They are what got me back into comics after years away.

[Bruce]

Not bad. Your faces have a bit of Terry Moore in them. I like the look.

[M.ellis]

Overall, a very nice, very impressive picture! You have some really nice rendering in there.

There's something a tad strange about Bigby's right hand - the illusion of foreshortening isn't quite reading to me - it's about 75% there. Maybe consider drawing a line overlapping the wrist from behind the thumb?

Also the face, left hand and gun of the lady on top there seem a bit stretched out. The left hand is quite a bit larger than the other one, and out of proportion to her body in general. The cheekbones/jawline line up fairly straight with her neck but her facial features fall at a slight angle. Photo-reference the gun and put all the tedious detail in there, or at least adjust the part where the magazine goes in and the sites. I think you'll find the M-16/ AR-15 body to be a little stockier and more square-shaped.