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  • Little Carl Owen meets his Nemesis: Sir Artie

    new illustration.. what do you think?



    EDIT: improved version



    EDIT: updated.... again.

    Last edited by Bozzilla; 01-31-2012, 06:12 PM.
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  • #2
    Absolutely love the colors and most of the artwork. Is that a monicle in his right eye? Also I don't mcuh care for the way the gentlemans hand lines up with the banister on the stairs. Looks like he's got a screwed up extra finger. Other than that I love it!
    Last edited by FroZen; 01-31-2012, 12:01 PM. Reason: didn't mean to quote

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    • #3
      I love the texture in the colors (watercolors?). The use of real photographs in the frames is a nice touch.
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      • #4
        Nicely done.

        You do have some tangent problems with the hands.

        Also flattening your space is the shadow the kid is casting on the wall. he's not that close to it.
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        • #5
          This is awesome! Nice designs. The one thing I notice is the color of the banister is too close to the color of the old man's skin so he doesn't really pop and like FroZen said, his hands get mixed up with the banister.

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          • #6
            Wow. Very cool, Bozz. Agree about the tangents with the hands. Other than that, though, this is really good.
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            • #7
              thanks for the quick responses!!
              wow, I didn't notice the tangent at all. I'll try to fix it in PS
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              • #8
                better? or is the hand to close to his other hand now?
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                • #9
                  From the original Sir Artie concepts I didnt get the impression that he was an antagonist; I really liked him! Here he looks very menacing though...so good job!
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                  • #10
                    Now his knuckle is creating a tangent with his sleeve.
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                    • #11
                      sirandal: yeah! when I first came up with the Sir Artie concept I wanted him to be the protagonist of a story but I thought, when I want to get the book published I won't take the risk of having an old man as the protagonist, so I'm really glad that he's working as the bad guy as well

                      symson: GAAHHHH!! you're right... sorry.
                      take a look at the update. unfortunately I can't get it shoved better than this.
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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Bozzilla View Post
                        symson: GAAHHHH!! you're right... sorry.
                        take a look at the update. unfortunately I can't get it shoved better than this.
                        That's better. The guy in the back limits what you can do.
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                        • #13
                          thanks again!!
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