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    Enjoyed working on actual paper so much with my Ghost sequentials that I came back for more. I loved Astonishing (Whedon and Cassady arc), and finally got around to trying my hand with the characters. Not a very deep pic, just trying to make an interesting group shot and give some personality to the characters. Crits very welcome, thanks for lookin'.
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    i think the composition could be better. Mostly the placement of cyclops and to a lesser extent the flying chick.

    The buildings look a bit dialed in.

    Everything else is top notch.
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    • #3
      Dude that is a fantastic page.
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      • #4
        Originally posted by Adam Masterman View Post
        just trying to make an interesting group shot and give some personality to the characters.
        mission accomplished. nice one.
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        • #5
          Cyclops is your weak link here. He's very static and his anatomy is peculiar - the long torso and square legs really throw things off. There's also a weird tangent with Wolvie's back and Colossus' leg - it makes Colossus look like he has chicken legs. Lockheed's placement could be a little stonger as well. Right now he looks like he's in the same plane as flying chick (is that Rogue? I can't keep up with her wardrobe), but I think you want him in the same plane as Kitty and Colossus. Lastly, Wolverine's far claws kinda dissappear. Angling them a bit will make him more intimidating. I hope this doesn't seem like heavy bashing - the piece could be really fantastic with a few changes. You're constantly impressing me and I want you to keep growing as an artist. Keep up the great work.
          Cheers, Alex

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          • #6
            Originally posted by hadesillustrations View Post
            I hope this doesn't seem like heavy bashing
            Not at all, man; I appreciate it. Cyke is definitely the weak link here, never really came up with a good solution for him, and he doesn't conform at all the the golden spiral layout that all the rest are placed on. This piece was something of a procrastination from working on my book, so I probably won't revisit it soon, but its always good to hear reactions.
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            • #7
              I dig it. Nice foreshortening on the claws.
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              • #8
                Astonishing drawing!
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