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  • Thwip!!

    Just a good ole classic spidey. Done without reference, which is rare for me these days. Critiques welcome...how does the anatomy and proportions look??



  • #2
    the left arm is a little short and he looks like he has three fingers on his web shooting hand. It's better than I can do!

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    • #3
      You're good, but I must agree with him, you should check all the details first. But aside from that I like the shadow part, it's cool.

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      • #4
        Well I see all his fingers, so I don't think it's a problem.
        The only thing that is bothering me is his head being too square on top. I know it's a stylistic choice, but maybe if you cut a little bit off the corner from the left side of his head. The side closest to his face I mean.
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        • #5
          Thanks for the tips!!

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          • #6
            I concur with Neddy.
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