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  • Origional Character

    In between commission, and a host of other stuff, hehe, I'm working on my own original story. Here's one of the characters. If it looks simple, or generic, that was the intention. The story is set in the Golden age of Comics. Anyway, be blessed, more to come and keep creating.

    Tools: Mechanical Pencil

    Last edited by caanan02; 08-06-2008, 11:49 AM.
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  • #2
    Hi Canaan. The creases on his left leg should be pulling down the leg not across it.

    I realise it's a convention in a lot of American comics but it can look odd with creases only coming from behind the knees and across the crotch. I think your stuff would look better without the creases. But that's just preference.

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    • #3
      The arm nearest too us looks quite uncomfortable.
      His wrist and hand are really turned towards us a bit more than I feel they should be.

      If the pose were more natural -- I don't think we'd be able to see the 'inside' of his fist there.
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      • #4
        The boots aren't the same shape. The one on our left looks rounded at the top. The one on our right looks pointed. Otherwise I think it's great. Seems like I've seen that belt somewhere else before though.

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        • #5
          i agree about the left hand but other than that looks great. cool costume
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          • #6
            Cool design, reminds me of Blackbolt!

            I agree with the arm issue.
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            • #7
              I like the design, is simple, but calls for attention, nicely done
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              • #8
                looks good, but one question, is the logo on the chest supposed to be asymmetrical?

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by leviwalton1 View Post
                  looks good, but one question, is the logo on the chest supposed to be asymmetrical?
                  yep. doh!!!!
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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by Beastie View Post
                    The arm nearest too us looks quite uncomfortable.
                    His wrist and hand are really turned towards us a bit more than I feel they should be.

                    If the pose were more natural -- I don't think we'd be able to see the 'inside' of his fist there.
                    had the other way. not sure why i changed it.
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                    • #11
                      Still a good artist. Reminds me of a Wildstorm character which doesn't ring a bell right now, but your guy looks cool. Good luck with it's progression.
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                      • #12
                        Awesome. What are this guy's powers?

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by thebigone View Post
                          Still a good artist. Reminds me of a Wildstorm character which doesn't ring a bell right now, but your guy looks cool. Good luck with it's progression.
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                          • #14
                            nice but..

                            the right calf/shin area seems a little off to me, the right hand of course I agree with other posts that the angle is to far outfacing

                            but the overall designs excellent.

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