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  • My first colored page

    Hi all,

    my name is Laura nd I'm new here.

    I recently started to learn digital color and I'd like to show you my first colored page

    By the way! I'm Caimano's fience

    Please let me know what you think
    Pencil : Angel Tovar



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    Last edited by lauracolor; 04-23-2011, 09:17 AM.

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    Welcome to PJ, Laura!

    Not a bad job on the colors, but you might want to work on creating a little more contrast so that people and objects separate from each other a little more. The gray doors are perhaps a little bland, and the blue on that guy's coveralls could be a little more subdued, I think, but this is decent work. It looks like you might need to work on your lighting a little bit also. Some of the shadow shape cuts look a little random and inconsistent.

    PencilJack has some great colorists who post on the boards--guys like Steve Downer, Korintic, Nate Lovett, and Nerdface might be able to give you some great coloring tips.

    In case you might not be aware of it, Hi-Fi Color for Comics is a very good book on the subject that you might want to check out: http://www.amazon.com/Hi-Fi-Color-Co...3592096&sr=8-1

    Once again, welcome to PencilJack! "Howdy" to Simone!

    -Loston
    http://www.lostonwallace.com
    http://lostonwallace.deviantart.com


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    • #3
      Hi Loston,

      thanks a lot for your feedback ! I'm going to work on what you suggested.

      I already got the Hi-Fi book and I'm studying it , this new adventure is something I really like and I'm going to do it right.

      Hope to have something new to show soon.

      Thanks
      Laura

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      • #4
        Well done my love.

        The page turned out good and it's a very good first coloring work!

        Loston (thanks pal) gave you very good improvement areas and I hope the PJ skilled colorists will give you other good advices.

        Keep up the good work!
        Simone Guglielmini
        http://www.simoneguglielmini.com/

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