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  • my entry for Thunder Brawl round 1

    here it is .my entry for the 1st battle .
    my guy fighting TPGing 40 ft tall Norse God.
    thanks for looking and any and all constructive critics.Note i did a few crude digital shading here and there.
    devianart
    http://brokenhill.deviantart.com/








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    The drawing looks pretty solid overall. It does look like you need a little work on your arm anatomy -- do a little study on the way the shoulder and upper arm muscles overlap.

    I think the main problem with the piece is that it's compositionally messy and hard to read. You need to more clearly separate your dark and light areas, and your detailed and open areas. It's easier said than done, but it's something worth working toward.
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      Thank you ,i'll try and work on the stuff you mentioned
      Originally posted by Orphangrinder View Post
      The drawing looks pretty solid overall. It does look like you need a little work on your arm anatomy -- do a little study on the way the shoulder and upper arm muscles overlap.

      I think the main problem with the piece is that it's compositionally messy and hard to read. You need to more clearly separate your dark and light areas, and your detailed and open areas. It's easier said than done, but it's something worth working toward.
      devianart
      http://brokenhill.deviantart.com/








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