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  • Starbomb group shot

    Did this as a pin-up for our very own Dann and his book, Starbomb.

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    I like your illustration, Electronicron, especially the wings on the winged character. Group shots are always difficult to pull off. I think you've managed to give each character a unique face with an expression on it and sense of personality.

    The main crit I would offer is that the heads on a few of the characters seem a bit large or out of proportion to their bodies, which makes them appear less powerful.

    Nice job, overall, though!
    HW(ret.):W42/ L29/KO16

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    • #3
      Minor crit, the character with the wings looks like he has his mouth full of something. Like he's about to spit water on the guy next to him.

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      • #4
        Thanks for the feedback!

        Scmarooney - agreed, particularly the guy 2nd from right. I had to re-draw him to make him taller and more imposing, and I guess things got outta hand.

        Enigmanaut - that's one of his powers. He can fly, and spit hot sauce....no not really. Agreed - I should've toned down some of the rendering around his mouth, and adjusted his profile a bit. I was trying to make his lips slightly pursed, but I suppose it's not working.
        HW / 37-6 / 18 KOs

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        • #5
          That would be a awesome super power. Hot Sauce Spitting Mega Man. MUAHAHAHAHA

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          • #6
            Some ones always gotta be black sheep...
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            • #7
              Very nice. Your pencils have sort of a John Cassaday feel to them.
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