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  • Spider-man vs. the Vulture: Non Pummel draw off

    I got to reading some early spidey and was pretty inspired by early Romita Sr. C & C's always welcomed.
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    Fantastic work.but I think i'll post crits later
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    • #3
      Make spidey's right hand a fist.

      Right now his fingers protrude out enough to make them not a fist, more like curled.

      Is a cool picture mein frein.
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      • #4
        Its got an old school feel to it

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        • #5
          Line work is nice. Great figures too. Spidey's punching hand seems just slightly small, but more pressing is the perspective on the buildings. Looks like all of them have different vanishing points.
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          • #6
            Great job on this. I like it a lot.

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            • #7
              Originally posted by necenarro View Post
              Line work is nice. Great figures too. Spidey's punching hand seems just slightly small, but more pressing is the perspective on the buildings. Looks like all of them have different vanishing points.
              That's not uncommon in New York, a lot of buildings settle and they wont line up perfectly

              I will say that the building closest to us has some off perspective, the roof does not vanish towards the lower floors.
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              • #8
                Thanks for catching those things fellas. Thats what you get when you rush a piece without crits from anyone but your wife.
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                • #9
                  After hearing your (very thoughtful) crits, I went back and made some changes. Let me know if this helps.
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