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    for the x-men drawoff.
    anycrits are more than welcome and thanks for looking.
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    Hey Brokenhill-- glad to see the response for Beastie's draw-off!

    I think the biggest crit I have is Colossus' armor plating. The way you separated it vertically (normally just horizontal) makes it look more like quilted armor than steel. I think your foreshortening was a more successful part and adds a dynamic element. The sound effect seems to detract from the piece, and I wish I could see the drawing without it, but it's tough to really get sound fx right. Juggernaut's head (although getting smashed) seems a little too crooked. I enjoy the piece though! Good luck in the draw-off.
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      Thanks I agree with everything you pointed out.Good eye,i didn't even notice his head tip too far.
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      • #4
        Originally posted by necenarro View Post
        The sound effect seems to detract from the piece, and I wish I could see the drawing without it...
        I agree with this. The FX looks too much like an object in the scene, like they are fighting in front of Kang's palace or something. I think it would look better without the perspective added to it. Otherwise, it's fine.

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          Thanks . since i don't have the abilities to PS this I tried smugging it a bit.
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          • #6
            I gotta agree with the remarks about the armor.

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            • #7
              With him slapping Juggy like that would make him have more twist in his waist and left shoulder, it looks like he is pulling his arm out of place with the motion of the slap.

              Just a little anatomy issue there, the armor has already been brought up so, nothing to really say there.

              Could say that Juggys anatomy is off to with his head and neck connection there, though I understand that is a hard thing to draw when it comes to necks.

              I like the idea, overall I think colossus is lacking the sense of motion and correct anatomy.

              Design side, I love the idea of the KANG and how the G is cracking, I would push that even further with the G breaking apart and exploding even making the A and N really cracking.

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                I'm with Pigeonmilk -- I'm not buying Colossus' pose. Here's a general tip to keep in my when you're drawing almost any kind of action pose, or even when people are just sitting around without using "proper posture" -- the hips go one way, the shoulders go the other! If the left hip is up, the left shoulder is down. If the hips go clockwise, the shoulders go counterclockwise. That's the single best trick I know of to instantly put life in any pose.
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