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  • Thats Magik

    Full colour commission of the character, Magik from New Mutants. HB mechanical pencils on A4 sized Bristol Board, coloured in Photoshop CS3 (no inks).

    Crits & comments would be appreciated!

    Thanks

    WH



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  • #2
    Nice work. Really well done on the colors.
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    • #3
      Is that a Kill Bill pose?

      The body and teleporting disc look good - but her face needs a bit of attention, IMO. The pencilled version looks ok - but its not working for me in colours. Her eyes look a bit like they're painted onto her face (if that makes sense?) the way you coloured and highlighted her nose suggests that its kinda wide and flat - and that contradicts the cute button nose you've suggested with your line work. Lastly, she has botox sausage lips and I think they should be re-done to look more natural.

      The shine / texture effects on outfit are superb.
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      • #4
        Manji
        thanks, man! glad you like 'em

        Beastie
        Great crits, thanks! Nope, the pose was done without any references, althought when i was coloring it it kinda reminded me of a kill bill pose too so maybe a subliminal thing!? Agree on all the crits, particularl;y the eyes which didnt turn out quite as well as id hoped. Glad you dig outfit colours

        thanks again guys.... any further crits/ coments would be appreciated!!

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        • #5
          Very nice work. I agree that the colors are really excellent. My primary crit is with her pose and this is a common mistake it seems. Magick is a righty and she's holding her sword lefty. I don't know if you intended to have her in a lefty pose - the angle of the sword seems like it was meant to be righty. I agree with Beastie as well about the face needing a few tweaks, but overall this is well done.
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          • #6
            that looks pretty good. i must be out of touch. i thought she was a kid. looks like she has grown up.
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            • #7
              First thing I noticed was the face- it doesn't look natural- no real expression or feeling at all- looks like a Barbie doll. The colors are pretty good though...
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              • #8
                Much appreciated, guys, great crits. Will do my best to take these on board for the next commission of this kind

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                • #9
                  I like the pencils a lot, no real problems here very nicely done.

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