wondie vs serpent thingie

[kae_ae]

this is as tight as i could get before i got sloppy



crit mah inks yo

edit: gah i hate my inks, tracing is ****ing hard maaaaaan

also, her left hand thumb is tiny!

[MilkManX]

I think the inking is decent but could be better. The Lasso line is the only one that is really offending. Get some brush pens( I like the Faber Castell Pitt Brush pen) and try that.

I also find that I get excited when I ink so I make myself take breaks to slow myself down. Otherwise I get in a rush to finish it and it turns out sloppy.

[kae_ae]

I didnt mind the rope much, i imagined the scales n rock texture to be better actually.

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Nice job, theres a couple of things that could be tighter but I think is a great piece

[Scribble King]

I like it, lots of energy in this one! But I think MilkManX is right, some brush pens might take your work to a whole new level.